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Hero

Posted by on February 13, 2012

What is a hero in your eyes? A hero to me

a hero to me is someone who does or try s to do something great for there country that hero to me is Wilfred Owen. Wilfred Owen is a hero to me because he fought and wrote poetry at the same time he was not full of hate he wrote about love and how war changed his life :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

By barrett meraw

 

9 Responses to Hero

  1. ncrawford

    Barrett – I would put a period after “there country” and change there to their. Change try s to “tries”. Start your new sentence ‘That hero to me is Wifred Owen.” As well, you need to add a period after “wrote poetry at the same time.” Start a new sentence with “He was not full of hate. He wrote about love and how war changed his life.”
    Tell me more about how he did great things for his country.

  2. Willis

    Thats a awesome first paragraph, i think you get your point out quite well. good job.

    -Willis

  3. sam

    great job barrett . but you have a few spelling and punctuation mistakes.If i were you i would chang there to their but other then that great post

  4. MAX

    good post but you need to fix what ncrawford said also we need to know more about him Bye

  5. sam

    great job barrett . but you have a few spelling and punctuation mistakes. If i were you i would change there to their but other then that great post

  6. benjamin

    Great job!! you have some mistakes in your post i think you should switch some words around later on

  7. emmaw

    There should be a capital A instead of lower case other then a few spelling mistakes it is a good piece and you should continue to write so.

  8. mgduqkam

    great work I think you should keep writing this great of work i love your format

    A

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